Monday, March 25, 2013

Letter

Dear Elena,
                  Hi my old friend, how are you? Talking about the summer school I´m going to, I strongly recommend you to come, this would be a great experience for you and also coming here will increase your english knowledge apart from many things. Feeling lonely? Don´t even think so i will tell you the name of my best friend, Steve, I met him the first day in the cantine, we just started talking about football and girls and we noticed we have many things in common. People here are very sociable so, knowing you i think you won´t have any problem with intergrating. Also, if you do all your work in the morning, this college offers a larga variety of sports and special activities during the day, and during the night there are about two or three parties, cool right? Finishing, I think teachers are awesome, they help  a lot when evaluating and don´t handle a lot of homework. Text me if you need a ride from the airport to college.
     I hope you finally decide to come here
                                                                 Best Wishes,
                                                                                      Richard

1 comment:

  1. Your letter is very well written. It is both persuasive and friendly, it sounds real. Unfortunately, your publication doesn´t show any paragraph organization. Remember this is crucial at any level.
    Satisfactory.

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